Draft monograph: MOTS-c — submissions
The 8 submissions received, published in full with declared interests and secretariat responses.
§2Submissions and responses
8 submissions were received. Each is published in full below with its declared interest, the secretariat response and the disposition. The Institute publishes submissions it did not accept in the same form as those it did.
The monograph should state what the compound costs
The respondent has read the draft covering MOTS-c and makes one submission.
The respondent states that a reader deciding whether to pursue treatment needs to know what it costs, and that omitting price makes the assessment less useful than it could be.
The respondent proposes that a price range be recorded for each compound with the source and date.
The secretariat does not accept this submission. Price varies by jurisdiction, payer, presentation and date to a degree that no single figure could survive, and a stale price is worse than no price.
No price is recorded. The monograph records the presentations available and the regulatory status in each jurisdiction, which are the facts the Institute can verify and maintain. The submission remains published in full.
Two factual descriptions of the sponsor's programme are inaccurate
Having read the draft monograph on MOTS-c, the respondent puts one point to the committee.
The submission is made on behalf of the marketing-authorisation holder and is confined to two matters of fact. The draft describes a trial as terminated where the sponsor closed it at a pre-specified interim analysis, and gives a dose in a unit that does not match the approved labelling.
Supporting documentation, comprising the published trial report and the current summary of product characteristics, accompanied the submission. No view is expressed on the certainty ratings, which the sponsor considers a matter for the assessment committee.
The secretariat accepts this submission. Both points are matters of fact, both were checkable against documents the Institute holds, and both were wrong in the draft.
The trial status now reads as completed at a pre-specified interim analysis, with the analysis identified, and the dose is stated in the unit used in the approved labelling. The submission is identified as an industry submission on its face in accordance with the conflicts policy.
Point estimates are given without an interval
The respondent notes that MOTS-c is supplied for indications remote from those studied, and submits in that context.
Several estimates in the draft appear as single figures. The respondent states that a point estimate without an interval invites a precision the underlying data do not support, and that the effect is worst where the estimate is drawn from a small contributing set.
The respondent proposes that no point estimate appear anywhere in the document set without its interval, including in summary tables and in the abstract.
The secretariat accepts this submission in part. Intervals are added wherever the source reports one. The proposal is declined for figures the source published without an interval, because the Institute will not compute an interval a source did not report.
Every estimate now carries its interval where the source reported one, and where it did not, the estimate is annotated as reported without an interval rather than left to appear as a precise figure.
Every contributing trial shares one sponsor and the monograph does not say so
The respondent submits on the draft monograph for MOTS-c. The mechanistic literature for this class is strong and the clinical literature is thin, and a document that does not make that plain will be read as though both were strong.
The respondent, who has published a systematic review of this literature, states that all of the contributing trials for the principal outcome were conducted by a single sponsor, and that this is a property of the evidence base rather than a criticism of any individual trial.
The respondent proposes that sponsor concentration be recorded as a characteristic of the evidence base in the certainty assessment rather than as a note in the discussion.
This submission should be read alongside submission 001, which arises on the same draft.
The secretariat accepts this submission. Sponsor concentration bears on what an independent replication would add, and the draft recorded it where a reader was least likely to see it.
Sponsor concentration is now stated with the certainty rating, and the monograph records how many independent sponsors contributed evidence to each assessed outcome.
Anti-drug antibody data are omitted
The respondent’s comment on the draft for MOTS-c arises from laboratory work with compounds of this class.
The respondent states that immunogenicity is measured in the development programmes of peptide therapeutics and that the monograph does not report it, leaving a reader unable to judge whether loss of effect over time has an immunological explanation.
The respondent proposes that anti-drug antibody incidence and its relation to effect be reported for every compound in the series.
The respondent has read submission 001 and puts a further matter to the secretariat.
The secretariat accepts this submission in part. Immunogenicity is reported where a contributing trial reported it. The proposal to report it for every compound is declined because for many compounds in the series no such data exist and a uniformly empty row is not informative.
Anti-drug antibody incidence and any reported association with loss of effect are now reported where measured, and recorded as not measured where the contributing trials did not assess them.
A purity figure from a certificate is quoted as though it were a content figure
The respondent read the draft on MOTS-c and has confined this submission to a single matter.
The draft quotes a purity percentage from supply documentation in a sentence about how much compound a vial contains. Chromatographic purity is a relative area within what was detected; it is not a mass fraction and it does not bound vial content.
The respondent, an analytical chemist, proposes that purity and content never appear in the same sentence without an explicit statement that they answer different questions.
The respondent has read submission 002 and asks that this submission be considered with it.
The secretariat accepts this submission. The conflation is the error the Institute most often corrects in supply documentation, and it appeared in an Institute draft.
Purity and content are now reported in separate rows with separate definitions, and the monograph states that a purity figure sets no bound on content and that a content figure requires a determination against a standard of assigned content.
What happens when the compound is stopped is not addressed
Having read the draft under consultation, which concerns MOTS-c, the respondent submits as follows.
The draft assesses the effect of the compound while it is being taken. The respondent, who declares having used a compound in the class under prescription, states that the question a person actually faces is what happens afterwards, and that the monograph is silent on it.
The respondent proposes that the trajectory after discontinuation be an assessed outcome wherever any contributing trial measured it, and a recorded evidence gap wherever none did.
The secretariat accepts this submission. The omission was one of framing rather than of evidence, and the framing followed the trials rather than the decision.
Discontinuation trajectory is now an assessed outcome in every monograph where a contributing trial measured it, and a recorded evidence gap in every monograph where none did, so that its absence is visible rather than silent.
The monograph does not tell a reader that two vials of the same compound may not contain the same thing
This submission concerns the draft on MOTS-c and is made from a biochemical standpoint.
The analytical section describes what a determination measures and the supply section describes what suppliers document. Neither says that the quantity of peptide in two vials bearing the same label may differ by more than the difference between two doses in the trial schedule.
The respondent proposes an explicit statement, in §8, that a purity figure describes the lot it was measured on and nothing else, and that the practical consequence is that a dose calculated from a label is an estimate.
The secretariat accepts this submission. It is the single most consequential thing a reader of this series can be told and it was distributed across three sections rather than stated once.
A standing paragraph now appears at the head of §8 in every monograph, stating that a determination applies to the lot measured and that a label mass is not a determination.
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